Monday, May 11, 2009

sentences exercise

There are many activities that I did last April . I went to Victoria and Whistler . When I was in Victoria , I visited The Butchart Gardens . It was great garden . I spent around three hours there, but I need more hours next time . When I went The Butchart Gardens , I saw many kinds of flowers . lastly , it was the highlight my trip .

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  1. yazeed
    corrections:
    I spent around 3 hours there
    no "in" - just next time
    lastly - it was the highlight of my trip.

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  2. hi yazeed I would love to go there in Vioctora.

    Nice trip I hope we can go together some day

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  4. That's kind a cool right?

    I hope to go to the Butchart gardens as you.

    good one buddy

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  5. Hello:
    This is a interesting paragraph. Because you went to two cities, and there are beautifaul cities. You saw gardens and flowers. That's good.

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  6. Dear Yazed hi

    I hope you are doing fine. It is nice to read your writing it is really intersting.


    warm greeting

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  7. Hi Yazeed

    you had a good trip with you your friend ~~~~~!@!@!!!!!

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